Question

【題目】書面表達。

不同的人喜歡不同的音樂。你喜歡什么音樂，你又不喜歡什么音樂？請你寫一篇短文談談你對音樂的不同喜好及其原因。

要求: 1. 中心突出，語言簡練，觀點明確;

2. 80詞左右。

提示詞: R&B music; noisy music

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Answer 1

【答案】Different people like different music. I like listening to music in my free time. I like music that has great lyrics and I can sing along with. I prefer gentle and quiet music. Some R&B music is my favorite. This kind of music often reminds me of someone who I care about and makes me feel happy or sad. I dislike noisy music or songs with words that I can't understand. What kind of music do you like?

【解析】這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like doing，listen to music，in my free time，this kind of，care about等。而Different people like different music./ I prefer gentle and quiet music. / This kind of music often reminds me of someone who I care about and makes me feel happy or sad.等多種句式的運用更是為文章增色不少。