Question

3．近年來，豐富多彩的課外活動(dòng)（After-class activities）在許多學(xué)校受到學(xué)生們的廣泛歡迎．某英文報(bào)社正在舉辦以"After-class activities"為題的英文征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇征文，介紹你們學(xué)校開展課外活動(dòng)的情況．要點(diǎn)如下：
●最受歡迎的課外活動(dòng)：球類運(yùn)動(dòng)、英語角交流等；
●參加課外活動(dòng)的益處：學(xué)到更多知識(shí)、交到更多朋友等；
●你的建議：選擇適合自己的課外活動(dòng)，豐富課余生活．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80-100；
 2．文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；
 3．征文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
After-class Activities
Recently，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in middle schools．       ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：We are able to enrich our lives and get more new knowledge我們能夠豐富我們的生活和獲得更多的新知識(shí)．be able to do sth．能夠做某事；enrich使…豐富．
高分句型二：In my opinion，we'd better choose the activities that interest us在我看來，我們最好選擇我們感興趣的活動(dòng)．in one's opinion在某人看來；后面是一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞是the activities，that在定語從句中充當(dāng)主語，故不能省略．

解答 Recently，after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in middle schools．
We have many colorful and meaningful after-class activities in our school．We take an active part in all kinds of after-class activities．We especially like ball games．Practising our English at the English corner is another smart choice．Of course，we also have some other activities，such as swimming，running，playing computer games and so on．（說明受歡迎的課外活動(dòng)）
We can learn a lot from these after-class activities．We are able to enrich our lives and get more new knowledge．（高分句型一）Besides，we can make more new friends．And these after-class activities can free us from the heavy work of study．（參加課外活動(dòng)的益處）
In my opinion，we'd better choose the activities that interest us．（高分句型二）They will not only make our school life colorful，but also improve our learning．（我的建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動(dòng)詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．