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15．隨著近幾年的快速發(fā)展，仁壽變得越來越美麗，大批的游客前來觀光旅游．假設(shè)你是仁壽某旅游景點的一名志愿者，請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，倡導(dǎo)游客文明旅游，生態(tài)旅游．
內(nèi)容提示：1．保護環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾2．遵守規(guī)章制度3．積極主動幫助他人4．盡可能用文明語言或普通話與人交流
參考詞匯：throw rubbish （扔垃圾）     communicate with （與…交流）  civilized language（文明語言）
My dear friends，
     Welcome to Ren Shou．With the development in recent years                                 
       If we remember these rules，we will travel ecologically（生態(tài)旅游）and politely．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we mustn't throw rubbish in order to protect the environment，which can make our city tidy為了保護環(huán)境，我們不能亂扔垃圾，那樣能讓我們的城市干凈．
which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，修飾前面的句子．
【高分句型二】
    If we remember these rules，we will travel eclogically and politely如果我們記住這些規(guī)則，我們能文明，生態(tài)旅游．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．

解答 My dear friends，
    Welcome to Renshou．With the development in recent years，Renshou is more and more beautiful．Lots of Chinese tourists come here to visit．As a volunteer，I'd like to tell you some considerations about visiting Renshou．
    First of all，we mustn't throw rubbish in order to protect the environment，which can make our city tidy．【高分句型一】（保護環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾）Secondly，it's our duty to obey the rules．We shouldn't break the rules during visiting．（遵守規(guī)章制度）Thirdly，we should try our best to help others，especially talk with the tourists  in Beijing Speaking as much as possible．（積極主動幫助他人，盡可能用文明語言或普通話與人交流）
    If we remember these rules，we will travel eclogically and politely．【高分句型二】

點評 題目中給出的材料較為齊全．動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順．為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞