Question

8．假如你是湯姆，得知你的朋友海倫生病住院，需要一大筆錢，導(dǎo)致她心情沉重、郁郁寡歡．請根據(jù)以下的提示給寫一封信，給他一些關(guān)心和建議．
要點(diǎn)提示：1．學(xué)會(huì)照顧好自己，保持好良好的精神狀態(tài)（stay in…）．
2．多與醫(yī)生、朋友談心，從中得到幫助．
3．不要擔(dān)心錢，因?yàn)槲覀儠?huì)幫你籌集錢（raise money）．
4．有空我會(huì)去看你，幫你補(bǔ)補(bǔ)課（help…with…）．
5．希望你能笑對(duì)人生（smile at…）早日健康．
寫作要求：要點(diǎn)齊全，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右．
Dear Helen，
       ．
Your sincerely，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  You can talk to the doctors or your friends when you are upset．當(dāng)你心煩意亂時(shí)，你可以和醫(yī)生或朋友交談．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
高分句型二
 I hope you can smile at life and get well soon．   希望你能笑對(duì)人生早日健康． 這是一個(gè)賓語從句，I hope是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 Dear Helen，
    I am sorry to hear that you are ill in hospital．I understand your feeling very well．But you know nobody can be happy all the time．You should learn to take good care of yourself and stay in a good mood【要點(diǎn)一，學(xué)會(huì)照顧好自己，保持好良好的精神狀態(tài)】．You can talk to the doctors or your friends when you are upset【高分句型一，注意時(shí)間狀語從句的使用】．Try to get help from them．You must follow the doctor's advice and take the medicine on time．【要點(diǎn)二，多與醫(yī)生、朋友談心，從中得到幫助】Don't worry about money because we can raise money for you．【要點(diǎn)三，不要擔(dān)心錢，因?yàn)槲覀儠?huì)幫你籌集錢】My friend and I will visit you when we are free．We can help you with your lesson．【要點(diǎn)四，有空我會(huì)去看你，幫你補(bǔ)補(bǔ)課】I hope you can smile at life and get well soon【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)五，希望你能笑對(duì)人生（smile at…）早日健康】
Your sincerely，
Tom

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．