Question

15．請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求完成作文，并將答案寫(xiě)在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置上．
假設(shè)你是Li Shan，讀了Stephen Williams的博客（blog）后，想在他的評(píng)論欄（Comments）分享自己的童年趣事．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文．
【寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)】

事件	過(guò)"立夏"（Start of Summer）--中國(guó)二十四節(jié)氣（solar term）之一
時(shí)間	六歲
地點(diǎn)	在鄉(xiāng)下祖父母家
體驗(yàn)	人人吃茶葉蛋，希望生活幸福
	奶奶把雞蛋裝在袋子里，掛在的哦胸（chest）前，以防止夏季疾病
	玩撞雞蛋的游戲，誰(shuí)的雞蛋不破，誰(shuí)就贏
感受	有趣、難忘
	…（請(qǐng)陳述1-2點(diǎn)）

【寫(xiě)作要求】
詞數(shù)90左右；
短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
文中需包括所有寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)加入過(guò)渡語(yǔ)句，使短文通順、連貫；
不能照抄原文，文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫．
I still remember my experience of Start of Summer，one of the 24Chinese solar terms．
…
I wish you all will come and experience the Chinese solar terms!
Li Shan，China．I still remember my experience of Start of Summer，one of the 24 Chinese solar terms．I went to my grandparents'home in the country when I was six years old【要點(diǎn)一，時(shí)間地點(diǎn)】．On the day ofStartofSummer，everyone ate tea eggs，wishing for a happy life and good health．My grandma hung an egg in a bag on my chest．She said that it could prevent summer diseases．What's more，we played a game of hitting eggs．If one's egg was not broken，he would win．【要點(diǎn)二，活動(dòng)】And we enjoyed it very much．It was very interesting and unforgettable!I miss my grandparents and my childhood friends．I wish you all will come and experience the Chinese solar terms!
Li Shan，
China．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I went to my grandparents'home in the country when I was six years old我六歲的時(shí)候去了鄉(xiāng)下的爺爺奶奶家．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
高分句型二
I wish you all will come and experience the Chinese solar terms我希望你們都能來(lái)體驗(yàn)中國(guó)的節(jié)氣．這是I wish后是賓語(yǔ)從句，注意時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般將來(lái)時(shí)．

解答 I still remember my experience of Start of Summer，one of the 24 Chinese solar terms．I went to my grandparents'home in the country when I was six years old．【高分句型一，時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】【要點(diǎn)一，時(shí)間地點(diǎn)】On the day of  Start of Summer，everyone ate tea eggs，wishing for a happy life and good health．My grandma hung an egg in a bag on my chest．She said that it could prevent summer diseases．What's more，we played a game of hitting eggs．If one's egg was not broken，he would win．【要點(diǎn)二，各個(gè)活動(dòng)】And we enjoyed it very much．It was very interesting and unforgettable!I miss my grandparents and my childhood friends．I wish you all will come and experience the Chinese solar terms【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】!【要點(diǎn)三，感受】
Li Shan，
China

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯
關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．