Question

14．電腦變得越來越普及，現在很多學生都有電腦．電腦的功能越來越多，它對人的幫助很多，但在電腦上花很多的時間一定對學生的學習造成影響．請根據表格提示和你自己對電腦的見解．

Advantages（優(yōu)點）	聽音樂，玩游戲，拍照 發(fā)郵件，-----
Disadvantages（缺點）	影響學習，引起眼睛酸痛 對健康有害-------
你的觀點-------

以Computer為題寫一篇短文．
要求：1．文章內容符合題意
2．文中不得出現考生的真實姓名、校名、地名
3．字數60詞以上
Computer
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
So ①playing too much on the computer②is bad for their health and study所以玩太多電腦對他們的健康和學習不利．
①動名詞短語做主語，謂語動詞用單數．
②be bad for 對…不利
【高分句型二】
①In my opinion，②whether it is good to use the computer depends on ourselves依我看來，使用電腦是否有益取決于我們自己．
①in one's opinion以某人看來．
②從句作為主語，謂語動詞用單數．

解答 Computer
As is known to all of us，computer is playing a more and more important role in our daily life．
Computer brings many advantages to us．First，We can listen to music，take photos and play games．Second，we can keep in touch with each other by sending e-mails．Third，we can learn a lot of knowledge from the computer．What's more，we can have lessons on the computer（優(yōu)點）
However，every coin has two sides．Some students spend lots of time playing computer games and lost themselves in the games．As a result，they fail to pass the exam and have a poor eyesight．So playing too much on the computer is bad for their health and study【高分句型一】．（缺點）
  In my opinion，whether it is good to use the computer depends on ourselves．【高分句型二】We can spare some time to search the important information online．When we are tired，the music and films on the computer can also make us relaxed．It's up to you，my friends？（我的觀點）

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．