Question

20．從下面兩個(gè)題目中任選一題，根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作．文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．所給提示詞進(jìn)行選用．請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名．
題目①
假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校將要舉辦長(zhǎng)跑接力賽，你打算邀請(qǐng)你們班交接生Peter參加．請(qǐng)用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他比賽的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，報(bào)名方式，以及需要做什么準(zhǔn)備
提示詞語：sign up（報(bào)名），on the school website，sports shoes
提示問題：•When and where will you have the race？
•How can Peter sign up for the race？
•What do you advise Peter to prepare for the race？

Dear Peter， ?How is it going？ I'm writing to invite you to take part in the long-distance relay race．              ． I'm looking forward to your early reply． Yours， Li Hua

題目②
假如你是李華，為了幫助洪災(zāi)地區(qū)的小朋友渡過難關(guān)，你們學(xué)校上周組織了以"友愛、互助"為主題的獻(xiàn)愛心捐贈(zèng)活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿，談?wù)勀阍谶@次活動(dòng)中捐贈(zèng)了什么，為什么捐贈(zèng)這些物品，以及你的感受．
提示詞語：donate（捐贈(zèng)），book，schoolbag，clothes，toy，help，proud
提示問題：•What did you donate？
•Why did you donate the things？
•How do you feel？
At my school，we made donations to children in the flooded areas last week．
               ．

Answer 1

分析 作文①：本文為提綱作文，且為應(yīng)用文--書信體．根據(jù)題目要求，可以判斷文章時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱"你"．寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2，如何報(bào)名參加；3，應(yīng)該如何準(zhǔn)備．字?jǐn)?shù)為不少于50字．
重要短語及詞匯：
the school sports meeting 校運(yùn)會(huì)
sign up 注冊(cè)，登記
follow the guidance 遵從指引
gym suit 運(yùn)動(dòng)服
on time 準(zhǔn)時(shí)
高分句型：
高分句型一：
In order to improve our teamwork as well as our running speed，we are required to train every afternoon after our classes from this Monday to this Friday．
為了提高我們的團(tuán)隊(duì)以及跑步速度，我們要求從這個(gè)周一到周五每個(gè)下午都要訓(xùn)練．
in order to 為了，引導(dǎo)目的狀語； as well as 和…一樣，以及；be required to do被要求做…一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)
高分句型二：
You'd better prepare your gym suit before the training．
訓(xùn)練前你最好準(zhǔn)備好你的運(yùn)動(dòng)服．
had better do sth 最好做某事  before為時(shí)間狀語，這里意為"訓(xùn)練前"．

作文②：本文為記敘文，且為應(yīng)用文--投稿．根據(jù)題目要求，可以判斷文章時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)及一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱．寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，在這次活動(dòng)中捐贈(zèng)了什么，；2，為什么捐贈(zèng)這些物品，；3，個(gè)人的感受．
重要短語及詞匯：
make donations 捐贈(zèng)活動(dòng)
as usual 像平常一樣
the flood disaster 洪災(zāi)
donate sth捐贈(zèng)某物
parcel sth up 將某物打包
keep on doing 繼續(xù)做某事
in time 及時(shí)
be proud with 以…為榮
though/even though 即使
高分句型：
高分句型一：
In order to help the children to get rid of hunger and keep on studying even though they are in the flood disaster，we donated clothes，food，school bags，books and toys．
為了幫助即使在洪災(zāi)中的孩子們遠(yuǎn)離饑餓和繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)，我們捐贈(zèng)了衣服、食物、校服、書以及玩具．
in order to 為了，引導(dǎo)目的狀語； get rid of 擺脫…；keep on doing sth 繼續(xù)做某事； even though 即使，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句．
高分句型二：
Though we can't help them to fight against floods，we should help them rebuild their homeland．
即使我們不能幫助他們對(duì)抗洪水，我們應(yīng)該幫助他們重建家園．
though 即使，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句；fight against 對(duì)抗； rebuild 重建； help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事．

解答 作文①：
Dear Peter，
?How is it going？
I'm writing to invite you to take part in the long-distance relay race． The school sports meeting will be held on the school playground at 2：00 on next Sunday afternoon．（運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)）We will meet at the school gate first at 1：30 p．m..Please come there on time．To sign up for the race，please open the school page online and follow the guidance on the page to sign up．（如何報(bào)名）In order to improve our teamwork as well as our running speed，we are required to train every afternoon after our classes from this Monday to this Friday．【高分句型一】You'd better prepare your gym suit before the training．【高分句型二】（如何準(zhǔn)備）
If you have any questions，please contact me．
I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

作文②：
At my school，we made donations to children in the flooded areas last week．
The news reported that the Yangtze River was bringing the people serious floods．【高分句型一】Many villages were destroyed by floods．Many children can't go to school as usual．In order to help the children to get rid of hunger and keep on studying even though they are in the flood disaster，we donated clothes，food，school bags，books and toys．高分句型一】（捐贈(zèng)的物品以及捐贈(zèng)這些物品的原因）We parceled them up and sent to them in time．We are quite proud with our donations．Though we can't help them to fight against floods，we should help them rebuild their homeland．【高分句型二】With the help of the donations，I believe most of the students will return to their school in the near future．（個(gè)人感受）

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