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18．假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Ann一直和父母生活在一起，今年初中畢業(yè)后考慮高中住校，現(xiàn)發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件尋求你的建議．請(qǐng)你結(jié)合提示給予回復(fù)．
  提示：1．支持她住校
       2．原因：①節(jié)約時(shí)間和精力，專注學(xué)習(xí)；
               ②學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活，照顧自己；
               ③與同學(xué)相處，增進(jìn)了解．
要求：1．詞數(shù)80詞左右；
     2．短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名和校名等信息；
     3．開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：住校live in school；精力energy
Dear Ann，
   I'm glad to hear fromyou．Here I'd like to tell you my advice．In my opinion，boarding is a good choice．frist，it can save your time and energy，you needn't to ply between school and home，so you can have more time and energy on your study．second，if you live in school，you have to take care of yourself and maybe you will being Independence．In addition to this，you will have more time with your classmates，it's a good way to know them．so，I think you shoud live in your school．I believe that you will have a wonderfulhigh school life and make many new friends．
 Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文需要我們根據(jù)題目中所給的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇提出建議的作文：根據(jù)提綱中的2條要點(diǎn)，1．支持她住校2．原因：①節(jié)約時(shí)間和精力，專注學(xué)習(xí)；②學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活，照顧自己；③與同學(xué)相處，增進(jìn)了解．
主要是給出建議．人稱為第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：in my opinion，frist．secon，in addition to this，take care of，it's a good way to 等等．

解答 In my opinion，boarding is a good choice．（支持住校） frist，it can save your time and energy，you needn't to ply between school and home，so you can have more time and energy on your study（原因，節(jié)約時(shí)間和精力）．second，if you live in school，you have to take care of yourself and maybe you will being Independence （原因，學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立）（高分句型）． In addition to this，you will have more time with your classmates，it's a good way to know them．（原因，增進(jìn)了解）（高分句型）
so，I think you shoud live in your school．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此為提綱作文．由于提綱材料本身決定了寫(xiě)作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開(kāi)作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．，要仔細(xì)審題，抓住重點(diǎn)，把所給信息條理清楚的表達(dá)出來(lái)，要求語(yǔ)句通順；語(yǔ)法，時(shí)態(tài)正確；書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．