我是一名中學(xué)生，我很喜歡我的學(xué)校生活和我的家庭，但我有時也有許多煩惱，在學(xué)校里我沒有很好的朋友，在家里我不想與父母交流，老師給我提出幾點建議：多參加活動，多與同學(xué)交流，把父母當(dāng)作最好的朋友……

根據(jù)所給話題的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮你的想像力，寫一篇英語短文。

要求：1. 意思連貫，符合邏輯；

2. 詞數(shù)不少于80字。

 

My Problem

I am a middle school student. I like my school life and my family very much. But sometimes I have a lot of problems. In school, I don’t have good friends, and at home, I don’t like talking with my parents. I usually feel lonely. Then I told these to my teacher. She gave me some good advice. She said I should take part in after-school activities. I should be more friendly and make friends with my classmates. I should get on well with my parents. I should tell my parents about my problems and look on them as my best friends.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們根據(jù)題目要求寫一寫自己生活中遇到的問題。這個話題是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，也是有話可說的。題目中給我們列出了這些問題是什么，如在學(xué)校里沒有朋友，在家里不想和父母交流等。題目中還有老師給的建議，我們也可以再根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)驗補充一些其他的建議，將這些用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，注意語句之間的連接，我們可以使用一些連詞。這篇短文應(yīng)該主要使用第一人稱，注意使用不同的時態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇短文主要分成三個部分。首先作者表達(dá)了對自己家庭和學(xué)校的熱愛；然后作者用but轉(zhuǎn)折，表述了自己生活中的問題；然后用Then I told these to my teacher這句話過度，引出了老師給出的建議。整篇短文結(jié)構(gòu)非常的合理，語句過度自然，銜接緊湊。短文使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，注意了動詞形式的變化，沒有出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。另外短文表達(dá)連貫流暢，其中較好的句式有But sometimes I have a lot of problems.、I don’t like talking with my parents、She said I should take part in after-school activities、I should get on well with my parents等。

考點：提綱類作文。

 

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