Question

5．請根據(jù)提示以The Person Who has influenced Me Most寫一篇80詞左右的短文．
提示：我媽媽是對我影響最大的人，她四十多歲，個子高高的，很苗條．她總是我家中起得最早的人，總是她做一日三餐，操持家務(wù)，晚上有時還輔導我作業(yè)．她自己還要上班，她在一家醫(yī)院工作．我認為媽媽是世界上最偉大的人之一．
My mother is the person who has influenced me most．
　　She is in her forties．She is tall and slim．She is always the first person to get up in my house，she cooks three meals for us and do the housework，sometimes she helps me with my homework in the evening．She is a doctor and works in a hospital，she works hard．I think my mother is one of the greatest man in the world．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
My mother is the person who has influenced me most．我的母親是最影響我的人．這是who引導的定語從句，修飾先行詞  the person．
 高分句型二
I think my mother is one of the greatest man in the world．我認為我的母親是世界上最偉大的人之一．這是一個賓語從句，I think 是主句，后面的是賓語從句，one of …．…之一．

解答 The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
　　My mother is the person who has influenced me most．【高分句型一，注意定語從句的使用】【開頭點明主題】
　　She is in her forties．She is tall and slim．She is always the first person to get up in my house，she cooks three meals for us and do the housework，sometimes she helps me with my homework in the evening．She is a doctor and works in a hospital，she works hard【正文部分詳細介紹媽媽的情況】．I think my mother is one of the greatest man in the world．【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點評 該文內(nèi)容合理，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，段落清晰，要點齊全．多次使用固定短語為文章增色不少．學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理．