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近來由于極端天氣，我國云南地區(qū)發(fā)生了特大旱情，致使小河斷流，湖泊干涸，魚類死亡，湖底成了牧場。請結(jié)合下面的提示詞，以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our  Environment”為題寫一篇80字左右的短文。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括從干旱引出的環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀、環(huán)保意識到節(jié)水，節(jié)能，控制污染等環(huán)保措施方面的描述。首句已給出，不計入字數(shù)。
提示詞： bad weather, bottom（底部）, river, lake, grass land, save water, drop, tap（水龍頭）, energy, turn on / off, recycle, control pollution, tears(眼淚).
要求： 1. 條理清楚，有表明自己觀點的句子。
?     2. 書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標點符號使用正確。
?     3. 短文中應(yīng)盡量包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名。
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
?It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China.

Answer 1

Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
?It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.
?So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave；do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.
?Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇關(guān)于保護環(huán)境的議論文.動筆前先要圍繞要點組織材料,確定寫作內(nèi)容,不要遺漏要點內(nèi)容.在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性,在表達觀點是注意情態(tài)動詞should的應(yīng)用。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞、序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。