Question

13．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic"Let's Be Friends of the Earth"．
（以"讓我們成為地球之友"為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格．）
The questions below are for your reference．（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）
l Why should we be friends of the Earth？
l What are we doing to the Earth？
l How can we be friends of the Earth？
（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)人名/班級等個人信息，否則不予評分）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
 If we don't protect the land，there will be no land to grow crops．如果我們不保護土地的話，就會沒有可以種植莊稼的土地了．if引導的是條件狀語從句，在if引導的條件狀語從句中，經(jīng)常用一般現(xiàn)在時來代替一般將來時．
句型二：
Besides，we should take public transportation instead of private cars．而且，我們應(yīng)該乘坐公告交通設(shè)施，而不是開私家車．Besides的意思是"而且，此外"包含后面的事物，instead of的意思是"而不是，相反的"

解答 Let's Be Friends of the Earth
The earth is the only place for people to live．If we don't protect the land，there will be no land to grow crops．【高分句型一】（if條件句） If we don't protect the sea，we'll get nothing from it in the future----no fish or other sea food．So we must be friendly to the earth．We should protect the air，the water and all the animals and plants around the earth．We should also use less paper and plastic bags．Besides，we should take public transportation instead of private cars．【高分句型二】Only when we take the earth as our friend，will it provide good conditions for us to live．So let's be friends of the earth．（說明保護地球的重要性）

點評 考生在寫作時，首先要仔細審題，注意人稱和時態(tài)，要做到內(nèi)容要點不能有漏落，思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢，注意使用比較高級的句法，比如條件狀語從句等．