你來到我們學(xué)校已經(jīng)兩年了，今天的你和兩年前的你一定有很多不同吧？請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，說說你的變化。不得少于60字。

提示：1. 比2年前高了許多；

2. 比以前瘦了一點(diǎn)，但比以前更健康了;

3. 所學(xué)的功課多了；

4. 玩電腦游戲的時(shí)間少了；

5. 學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)和以前一樣，打算更加努力地學(xué)習(xí)以取得更好的成績(jī)。

 

 

 

I have changed a lot since I came to this school two years ago.I used to be short and always get sick.Now I am much taller than before.Though I am a little thinner,I am healthier than before.I used to play computer games a lot. But now I have many subject at school,so I don’t have much time to play it.My study is as bad as usual.I think study must first.So I am going to study harder in order to get good grades.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文是對(duì)過去與現(xiàn)在的變化作比較，故多用比較級(jí)；行文時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化，同時(shí)適當(dāng)使用連詞，使上下文聯(lián)系更緊密，更符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文多使用簡(jiǎn)單句，使用了一般過去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在是和一般將來時(shí)等時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用形容詞比較等級(jí)把發(fā)生的變化表達(dá)了出來。同時(shí)使用了一些連詞和短語，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

 

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