Question

9．Time isfor businessmen；
Time isfor doctors；
Time is soto everyone，it will never．
As for me．
一首"Where is the time？"又一次引發(fā)了人們對(duì)時(shí)間的感慨，作為即將參加中考的你，將怎樣充分利用時(shí)間，為初中三年畫上一個(gè)圓滿的句號(hào)．請(qǐng)從以下幾個(gè)方面，以"Treasure every minute"為題，寫一篇不少于100詞的短文．（文章里不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名）
（1）時(shí)間的重要性        
（2）你身邊浪費(fèi)時(shí)間的現(xiàn)象
（3）你的時(shí)間去哪兒了   
（4）你將怎樣充分利用余下的時(shí)間？
Treasure every minute
People often say，"Time is money，"But in fact time is more valuable than money．If money is spent，we can earn it back．However，if time is lost，it will never return．This is the reason why we must value time．The time we have is limited．But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time．They spend their time chatting，smoking or drinking．They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life．As for me，I spend most of my time doing homework．In a word，every minute is precious，we should make full use of our time．Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"Treasure every minute"為題談?wù)剷r(shí)間的重要性以及怎樣充分利用時(shí)間．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
（1）時(shí)間的重要性        
（2）你身邊浪費(fèi)時(shí)間的現(xiàn)象
（3）你的時(shí)間去哪兒了   
（4）你將怎樣充分利用余下的時(shí)間？

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
in fact事實(shí)上
spend+時(shí)間+doing sth 花時(shí)間做某事
in a word 總之
make use of 利用

【高分句型】
1．①However，②if time③is lost，it will never return．
①however表轉(zhuǎn)折，然而．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主將從現(xiàn)．
③is lost是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)．

2．①But ②there are a lot of people③who do not know the importance of time．
①but表轉(zhuǎn)折，但是．
②there be表示有，謂語動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)根據(jù)就近原則確定．
③who是關(guān)系詞，做定語從句的主語不可省略，修飾先行詞people．

解答 Treasure every minute
People often say，"Time is money，"But in fact time is more valuable than money．If money is spent，we can earn it back．However，if time is lost，it will never return．（時(shí)間的重要性 ）【高分句型】This is the reason why we must value time．The time we have is limited．But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time．【高分句型】They spend their time chatting，smoking or drinking．They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life．（浪費(fèi)時(shí)間的現(xiàn)象）As for me，I spend most of my time doing homework．（我的時(shí)間去哪兒了）In a word，every minute is precious，we should make full use of our time．Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow．（怎樣充分利用余下的時(shí)間）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．