Question

11．假設(shè)你叫張明，收到了你的筆友Tom的一封信，請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封回信．在信中回答他的問(wèn)題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />I have a problem these days．I don't think our English teacher likes me．She wasn't satisfied with me because I got a C in the exam．My classmate Lucy got a C，too．But she praised her．She said Lucy had tried her best and spent most time on English，but I didn't．It makes me unhappy．I think it's unfair．Do you have the same problem？What do you think of my English teacher？What should I do？
Yours，
Tom
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  But I don't think your idea is right．但我認(rèn)為你的想法不對(duì)． 這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I don't think 是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．
 高分句型二
   Your teacher will be pleased when you make great progress  當(dāng)你取得進(jìn)步時(shí)，你的老師會(huì)很高興的．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．

解答 Dear Tom，
I have the same problem as you．I can understand you．【要點(diǎn)一，提出有相同的問(wèn)題】But I don't think your idea is right【高分句型一，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．She wasn't satisfied with you because she thought you should work harder．She is strict with you．It's good for your study．I think you had better spend more time on your study，and try to improve your English．Your teacher will be pleased when you make great progress【高分句型二，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．As a student，we should work hard at our lessons and try to understand our teachers．【要點(diǎn)二，我的觀(guān)點(diǎn)】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．