Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

最近，社會(huì)上在熱議已由全國(guó)人大立法通過(guò)的新的國(guó)家計(jì)劃生育政策，即俗稱的 “二孩政策”（second-child policy）。假設(shè)學(xué)校本周“英語(yǔ)角”將以此為話題展開(kāi)討論，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文作為討論稿，闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。

要求：1. 詞數(shù)80-100左右。 (開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

2. 表明你的觀點(diǎn)（贊同或反對(duì)），至少說(shuō)明兩點(diǎn)理由。

3. 語(yǔ)句連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。

Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child. Some students object to the new policy. They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents. And they will not get what they want so easily as before. The little sister or brother may also affect present quiet life, even the study.

Some students say they welcome the new policy. They think it will give more happiness to the family. There will be more people to communicate with and more brothers or sisters to look after the old of the family.

I agree on the second opinion. And I can’t wait for a new baby in my family. I believe he or she can bring many surprises to us. (116 words)

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)清晰，用了很多比較復(fù)雜的詞匯和句子。例如：They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents;They think it will give more happiness to the family.使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰明了。