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　　假設(shè)你是Jim，根據(jù)提示寫一篇50～70字的短文。

　　1．時(shí)間：上星期天；2．地點(diǎn)：農(nóng)場(chǎng)；3．人物：全班同學(xué)；4．事件：幫農(nóng)民摘蘋果；5．議論：累但很開心。

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答案：One possible version: 　　It was fine last Sunday. All my classmates and I went to the farm near our school by bus. The farmers there were very busy. They needed some help with the apple-picking. So we helped them pick apples. Everyone worked very hard. It was really hard work. We worked till late in the evening. We were very tired but we enjoyed it very much. (63　words) 　　解析：根據(jù)條件“假設(shè)你是Jim”可知，本文應(yīng)以第一人稱展開敘述。 從所給要點(diǎn)來看，本文是一篇記敘文。文章大意是Jim及全班同學(xué)上星期天去農(nóng)場(chǎng)幫農(nóng)民們摘蘋果。但僅這幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)遠(yuǎn)不能組成一篇文章。還要展開想像，增加適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z句，構(gòu)成完整的篇章。本文可增加對(duì)天氣的描述；去農(nóng)場(chǎng)的方式；農(nóng)民們很忙，需要幫助；勞動(dòng)吃苦；勞動(dòng)時(shí)間等語句，使文章情節(jié)完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。