Question

5．初三年級學(xué)生李雷近來十分焦慮．體育測試即將到來，而他卻由于霧霾 （haze weather）頻頻來襲無法進(jìn)行戶外體育鍛煉．他寫信給好友Jack尋求幫助．假如你是Jack，請給他寫一封信，從鍛煉的時間、地點及日常飲食等方面提一些建議，使他保持良好的身體狀況．
要求：1．文章中必須包括所有信息；
2．不得使用真實的人名和校名等信息；
3．詞數(shù)80詞左右；
4．開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Dear Li Lei，
I've known about your worries．Here is some advice for you．
Firstly，when haze weather happens/comes，it's better not to do exercise outdoor．If you need to exercise，you can choose indoor activities．
Secondly，haze often gets thinner after the sun shines．So the time from 10 a．m．to 4 p．m．is a good time to exercise．You can do some outdoor sports during this time because haze is not so serious．
Last but not least，improving health is also important．Live a happy life，like eating more fruit and vegetables，and you will have more energy to fight against haze．
I hope my advice can help you．
Yours，
Jack．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If you need to exercise，you can choose indoor activities．如果你需要鍛煉，可以選擇戶內(nèi)的活動．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
You can do some outdoor sports during this time because haze is not so serious這個期間你可以做些戶外的活動因為霧霾不是很嚴(yán)重．
because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 Dear Li Lei，
I've known your worries．Here is some advice for you．
Firstly，when haze weather happens/comes，it's better not to do exercise outdoor．If you need to exercise，you can choose indoor activities．【高分句型一】（鍛煉地點）
Secondly，haze often gets thinner after the sun shines．So the time from 10 a．m．to 4 p．m．is a good time to exercise．You can do some outdoor sports during this time because haze is not so serious．【高分句型二】（鍛煉時間）
Last but not least，improving health is also important．Live a happy life，like eating more fruit and vegetables，and you will have more energy to fight against haze．（飲食）
I hope my advice will help you．
                                                   Yours，
                                                      Jack

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