Question

【題目】請你以“My family”為題，寫一篇小短文。內(nèi)容包括：家庭成員的介紹、年齡、職業(yè)、各自的愛好……等等，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

要求：語言正確，表達流暢，書寫美觀，詞數(shù)不少于60。

My Family

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Answer 1

【答案】

My family

I am a middle school student. I am a boy of 12. I have a happy family.

There are three people in my family-my father, my mother and I. My father is a worker. He works in a factory near my home. He is 36 years old. He likes playing soccer. My mother is 35. She is a teacher in No.1 Middle School. She teaches Chinese. She likes singing and dancing. She is good at singing and she dances well. I am a student in No.1 Middle School. I’m in Class 4 Grade 7.I like all my subjects. But my favorites are math and English.

All my family work hard. We are very happy every day.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求對家庭成員的年齡、職業(yè)、各自的愛好等等方面作介紹。本文的時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時，要根據(jù)主語正確使用am, is , are，同時要分清主語是否是三人稱單數(shù)，準(zhǔn)確地用動詞的原形或加s/es的動詞形式。

寫作亮點：本文按要求對家庭成員的年齡、職業(yè)、各自的愛好等等方面作了介紹。表達清楚，時態(tài)準(zhǔn)確。短文按總－分－總的框架，第一自然段總寫I have a happy family。第二自然段分別介紹各家庭成員的年齡、職業(yè)、愛好等等。第三自然段則與第一自然段相呼應(yīng)：We are very happy every day. 重點突出，中心突出。