Question

根據(jù)所給圖畫(huà)，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇約80詞的短文。要求完整敘述故事內(nèi)容。
參考詞匯：skin果皮， rubbish bin垃圾箱

                                                                                    
                                                                                       
                                                                                        
                                                                                 
                                                                                         
                                                                                         
                                                                                        
                                                                                    
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           
                                                                           

Answer 1

One possible version
One morning, as Lihua was walking on the way to school, he threw a banana skin on the road. After a while, a little boy stepped on the skin and fell down. So he began to cry. At this time, a girl passed here. When she saw the boy, she lifted him up. Lihua felt sorry, and he thought it wrong to throw the skin here and there. At last, he picked up the skin and threw it into the dustbin.

試題分析：這是一篇給圖畫(huà)作文，根據(jù)圖畫(huà)敘述一個(gè)故事。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：as Lihua was......； a little boy stepped ......； When she saw......及he thought it ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了李華在上學(xué)路上扔了一個(gè)香蕉皮，接下來(lái)介紹一個(gè)小男孩踩上了香蕉皮，一個(gè)女孩把他扶起來(lái)，最后李華感到抱歉，把香蕉皮扔進(jìn)了垃圾箱里。此處用了on the way to ，stepped on，lifted him up. 及picked up 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。