Question

Nick的美國筆友Bob向他詢問他和他的妹妹Linda及他兄弟Tom的業(yè)余愛好 假如你是Nick 請根據(jù)表格給Bob 寫一封信介紹一下。 開頭已給出。

People	Hobby	How long	How many
Nick	收集貝殼	5年	大約220枚
Linda	集郵	自從她十歲以來	300多枚
Tom	收集硬幣	3年前開始	200多枚

Dear Bob,

I received your letter this week. Linda，Tom and I have different hobbies.

 

 

 

 

Yours,

Nick

 

Answer 1

Dear Bob,

I received your letter this week. Linda, Tom and I have different hobbies. We all like collecting things. I like collecting shells, I have collected them for 5 years, and I have about 220 shells now. My sister Linda likes collecting stamps, she has collected them since she was ten years old. She has more than 300 stamps now.She says she can learn a lot from these stamps. My brother Tom likes collecting coins, he has collected them since 3 years ago, now he has over 200 coins. He still wants to collect more coins.

Can you tell me your hobby?

Yours,

Nick

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，所給材料要點清晰，要求明確，內(nèi)容貼近學生生活實際，學生有較大的發(fā)揮空間。動筆前要認真審題，勾勒要點，并適當發(fā)揮。行文中要注意人稱、時態(tài)的變化及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復合句，使文章自然流暢。同時，使用了一些常用句式和短語，這為文章增色不少。學習中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：材料作文。