Question

20．節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境，從我做起．作為中學(xué)生，為了保衛(wèi)我們美麗的地球家園，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做，請以"What can we do for the environment"為題，并根據(jù)下列的提示，簡單談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />1、綠色出行，如每天步行或騎車上學(xué)；
2、不亂扔垃圾，不隨地吐痰；
3、離開教室時，關(guān)燈、電視等；
4、購物時使用布袋，不使用塑料袋；
5、…
提示詞：instead of，leave，spit，shut off，cloth bag
要求：1、涵蓋所給信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2、詞數(shù)70左右（短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．
What can we do for the environmentAs we all know，the environment around us is getting worse and worse．We should do something to protect ourenvironment…
                                                                                 

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
1．The first thing①we can do is ②to use cloth bags③instead of plastic  bags ④when we go shopping．第一件我們能做的事情是購物的時候用布袋不用塑料袋．
①we can do作為定語從句，修飾先行詞thing，關(guān)系詞which作為從句的賓語，可以省略．
②動詞不定式做表語，與is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
③instead of 代替…而不是…
④when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
Also，we should never ①forget to ②turn off the lights and TV③when we leave the classrooms ④in order to save energy．離開教室的時候我們也不應(yīng)該忘記關(guān)燈和電視，為了節(jié)約能量．
①forget to do sth 忘了去做某事．
②turn off 關(guān)…
③when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
④in order to 為了…，表目的，做目的狀語．

解答 What can we do for the environmentAs we all know，the environment around us is getting worse and worse．We should do something to protect ourenvironment．The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic  bags when we go shopping．【高分句型一】It helps to protect the environment．（在購物時用布袋替代塑料袋）The second thing we can do is that we shouldn't throw rubbish and spit everywhere（不亂扔垃圾，不隨地吐痰）Also，we should never forget to turn off the lights and TV when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy．【高分句型二】（離開教室應(yīng)關(guān)燈電視）What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school．（最好走路或騎自行車上班）We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste．We shouldn't use disposable plates，bowls．（我們不應(yīng)該使用一次性盤子，碗等等）We should plant more trees and grow grass to prevent it．We should also prevent people from cutting down too many trees．（不要濫砍樹）In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in．

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．