Question

今年央視春晚，一曲《時(shí)間都去哪兒了》讓許多觀眾深受感動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是九年級(jí)一班的李明，你將代表班級(jí)參加學(xué)校舉行的“感恩父母”英語(yǔ)演講比賽。演講內(nèi)容包括：

1.講述一件你和父母之間難忘的事情;
2.你對(duì)“感恩父母”的認(rèn)識(shí)；
3.具體的感恩行動(dòng)（至少兩點(diǎn)）；
4.表達(dá)祝福與愿望。
注意：
1．語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；         
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；      
3．詞數(shù)80左右。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. Today the topic of my speech is love for my parents.
                                                   
                                                                                
                                                                    
                                                                                
                                                                    

Answer 1

Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. Today the topic of my speech is love for my parents. My parents do many things for me. When I was 10 years old, I caught a cold and had a high fever at midnight. I felt so terrible. My mother took me to  hospital immediately. She took good care of me without a rest during the whole night.
My parents give me almost everything. However, they don’t want to get any reward from me. From now on, I will help my parents do more housework. My mother’s birthday is coming, I will make a birthday card for her. I must thank her by studying hard. I hope my parents are in good health forever.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹一件你和父母之間難忘的事情;談?wù)勀銓?duì)“感恩父母”的認(rèn)識(shí)并寫(xiě)出具體的感恩行動(dòng)。會(huì)用到過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文能寫(xiě)明全部要點(diǎn)；運(yùn)用了較高級(jí)的詞匯，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤；合理運(yùn)用了復(fù)合
句使行文連貫 表達(dá)清楚。