Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)
Jill是一名初三的學(xué)生。她很喜歡玩電腦，但她現(xiàn)在每天有很多的功課，沒(méi)時(shí)間去做自己的興趣愛(ài)好。她感到很苦惱。她寫(xiě)了封信給Sigmund,希望能得到一些建議。
不少于60個(gè)字，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)數(shù)。
Dear Sigmund,
I am a Grade 9 student.                                                       
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Jill

Answer 1

Dear Sigmund,
I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem but I don't know how to solve it.
    I have a lot of hobbies. Playing computers is my favourite. But now I find I do not have enough time to do my hobbies because of too much homework every day. I feel stressed though I know doing homework is very important. I feel really bad about it.
Should I focus on my homework and give up my hobbies? Can you tell me how to keep a balance between the two? I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Jill

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信介紹自己的煩惱，征求建議。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱(chēng)就是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。