Question

在你成長(zhǎng)的過程中，難免會(huì)遇到父母外出，你獨(dú)自在家的情況。某國(guó)際學(xué)校的英語論壇正在舉辦關(guān)于這個(gè)話題的討論，請(qǐng)你發(fā)一個(gè)帖子參與交流，談?wù)劯改竿獬鰰r(shí)，你自己度過的一次經(jīng)歷，并就此事談?wù)勀愕母邢牒腕w會(huì)。
提示詞語：out, alone, cook, come back, happy, take care of, depend on

Answer 1

One possible version:
Everyone may have the experience to stay alone while his or her parents are out.
One day last year, both of my parents went out for their business. So I had to live on my own. I went to school and came back home as usual. I cooked dinner for myself, did my homework carefully, and went to bed on time. When my parents came back, they were happy to see I was able to take good care of myself!
I think we shouldn’t depend too much on our parents, but learn to stand on our own feet. Nothing is impossible if we try our best.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: have to不得不；live on靠……生活；as usual像往常一樣；on time按時(shí)；take care of照顧；try one’s best盡力等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。