Question

根據(jù)下面的提示用英語寫一篇日記，記錄4月14日（星期天）你和你的朋友李明
一起參觀南通博物館的經(jīng)過。

內(nèi)容要點
距離	博物館離家約五公里
交通工具	騎自行車
時間	八點出發(fā)，十二點回家
內(nèi)容	看到了許多照片、實物等，看見了許多孩子和他們的家長
收獲與感受	……（請考生自擬至少兩點內(nèi)容）

 
要求：1. 詞數(shù)：90左右，開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2. 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Sunday, Apr. 14                                                    Fine
Today is a fine day. My friend Li Ming and I decided to visit the Nantong Museum.
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Answer 1

Sunday, Apr. 14                                                    Fine
Today is a fine day. My friend Li Ming and I decided to visit the Nantong Museum.
It is about 5 kilometres away from my home. So we went there by bike. We set off at 8 o’clock. It took us half an hour to get there. At the museum we saw many photos and other interesting things. Some of them are very old. There we saw a lot of children with their parents. They were also very interested in those things. At twelve we left the museum for home.
Today we (have) learned a lot about the history of Nantong. Although we were very tired, we felt very happy. What a wonderful day!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇記述文，介紹參觀南通博物館的經(jīng)過。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要是一般過去時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題。人稱主要為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題。本文主要按照時間關(guān)系進(jìn)行敘述，寫作適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
點評：做英語書面表達(dá)時，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。