Question

15．請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息以"Learn to express thanks"為題，用英語寫一篇演講稿．

背    景	1認為上中學時吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的； 2走向社會后沒有感恩意識．
學會感恩	1感謝社會提供良好的教育機會； 2感謝父母供養(yǎng)自己上學； 3感謝老師傳授知識； 4感謝朋友的支持與鼓勵．

參考詞匯：enter society 進入社會，sense of thanks 感恩意識，behavior 行為
要求：1短文應(yīng)包括所提供的所有內(nèi)容，可以適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；
2演講稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名及能夠透露你個人身份的信息；
3詞數(shù)：80詞左右．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is"Learn to express thanks"．We find most Middle School students don't show any sense of"Thanks"．They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionableclothes．
As Middle School students，we should learn toexpress thanks．The society offers us a chance to receive good education．We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school．And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us muchknowledge．Besides，our friends always give us encouragement and help．
In a word，we are lucky in everything．But weshould learn to express thanks．
In the future，we should never forget our society，parents，teachers and so on．At present，we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful．
Thank you for your listening!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"Learn to express thanks"為題說說如今的中學生的感恩意識并建議應(yīng)該學會感恩．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1背景：
（1）認為上中學時吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的；
（2）走向社會后沒有感恩意識．
2學會感恩：
（1）感謝社會提供良好的教育機會；
（2）感謝父母供養(yǎng)自己上學；
（3）感謝老師傳授知識；
（4）感謝朋友的支持與鼓勵

常用到的重點短語：
offer sb sth給某人提供某物
thank sb for…因為…感謝某人
support sb to do sth支持某人做某事
besides另外
in a word總之

高分句型：
1．We should①thank our parents for②supporting us to go to school．
①thank sb for…因為…感謝某人，for是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動名詞．
②support sb to do sth支持某人做某事
2．And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge．
who teach us much knowledge是定語從句，修飾先行詞teachers，關(guān)系詞who作為從句的主語，不可省略．

解答 Good morning，boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is"Learn toexpress thanks"．We find most Middle School students don't show any sense of"Thanks"（沒有感恩意識）．They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes（認為上中學時吃好穿好是應(yīng)該的）．
As Middle School students，we should learn to express thanks．The society offers us a chance to receive good education．（感謝社會）We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school．（高分句型）（感謝父母）And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge．（高分句型）（感謝老師）Besides，our friends always give us encouragement and help．（感謝朋友）
In a word，we are lucky in everything．But we should learn to express thanks．In the future，I should study harder to repayour parents and teachers．I should go to my friends to share their happinessand sadness．
Thank you for your listening!

點評 本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，談?wù)勱P(guān)于假期的問題．要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，注意將提示的要點表達清楚，并發(fā)表自己的觀點．注意主謂一致問題．寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，如賓語從句，條件狀語從句等．注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用．內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣．