Question

1．下面是某一英文報上刊登的一封讀者來信，請你給這位中學生寫封回信．
Dear editor，
I have a big problem now．You see，I am a little shy．Sometimes I really don't know whom I should ask for help when I am in trouble．I am always afraid that I will disturb（打擾）them What should I do？Can you give me some advice？
Yours，
Lucy
要求：
1．回信的內(nèi)容要包括以下要點：
（1）首先要學會與人交流，多交朋友；
（2）可以求助于同學和朋友，因為年齡相仿，容易相互理解；
（3）可以求助于老師和家長，因為他們愿意幫你，也懂得更多．
2．為了使文章連貫，可適當增加內(nèi)容．
3．詞數(shù)90左右．信的開頭與結尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Lucy，
What you said is common with some middle school students．Here is my advice．                               
Yours，
Peter．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible．
句中使用短語有："communicate with sb 跟某人溝通"、"make friends 交朋友"、"as…as possible  盡可能…"．這句話意為：首先，你應該學習怎么跟別人交流，盡可能多的交朋友．
高分句型二：
Besides，you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask them for  help．
句中使用短語有："tell sb about sth 告訴某人關于某事"、"ask sb for help 向某人尋求幫助"．這句話意為：另外，你可以告訴老師或父母你的問題，并向他們尋求幫助．

解答 Dear Lucy，
     What you said is common with some middle school students．Here is my advice．（開篇點題）
     First，you should learn how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible．【高分句型一】Then when you are in trouble，you can ask your classmates or friends for help because they are the same age as you．I think you can understand each other easily．Besides，you can also tell your teachers or parents about your trouble and ask them for  help．【高分句型二】You see，they are always ready to help you．What's more，they know more about the problems．（提出建議）
     I hope you think my advice is worth taking and can get better soon．（表達祝福）
Yours，
Peter

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．