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【題目】同學(xué)們，你們進(jìn)入初中學(xué)習(xí)已有近四個(gè)月的時(shí)間了，你們覺(jué)得初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活怎么樣？快樂(lè)嗎？假使你是Jack，在你受到你朋友Tom的來(lái)信后，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息告訴你的朋友有關(guān)你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)80左右．

1．學(xué)校很大，有一個(gè)圖書館和許多教學(xué)樓。

2．學(xué)生們每天早起，上學(xué)從不遲到。

3．老師們工作努力，對(duì)學(xué)生都很好。

4．學(xué)校舉行各種各樣的活動(dòng)，許多學(xué)生在學(xué)校玩得很開(kāi)心。

5．有些學(xué)生認(rèn)為他們整天忙于學(xué)習(xí)，沒(méi)有時(shí)間去玩。

你認(rèn)為呢？你希望……

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【答案】

Dear Tom.

I’m happy to get your letter to know about your study and life at school " .Our school is very big. There is a library and many classroom buildings. In our school, the students get up early every day, they are never late for school. The teachers in our school work hard, and they are all nice to their students. There are all kinds of activities in our school. Many students think they have a good time at school.

Some students think they are busy studying at school all day, they don’t have much time to play. So they don’t feel happy. I hope our school can give us much time to do after-school activities. I hope the teachers will not give the students too much homework to do.

Yours sincerely

Jack

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一，三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: get up，起床；be late for，遲到；all kinds of，各種各樣的；have a good time，玩得高興等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。