Question

2．今年我市深入開展了"學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒精神，共創(chuàng)文明城區(qū)"的活動(dòng)．在3月5日學(xué)雷鋒紀(jì)念日這天，你校組織志愿者去廣安敬老院開展"學(xué)雷鋒，送溫暖"活動(dòng)．假如你是廣安七中學(xué)生張華，請你將活動(dòng)情況介紹給美國朋友Ben，與他分享你的美好經(jīng)歷．（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容見下表）

活動(dòng)時(shí)間	3月5日
活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)	廣安敬老院（Guang'an Nursing Home）
參加人員	學(xué)校志愿者（volunteer）
活動(dòng)形式	1送去鮮花和水果 2幫助打掃衛(wèi)生 3陪老人聊天（chat with sb）、唱歌、跳舞 4送去美好祝愿 5…
活動(dòng)感想	關(guān)愛（care for）老人（the elderly people），尊重（respect）老人

要求：
1．短文應(yīng)包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；
3．文章不低于80詞．開頭、結(jié)尾已給出．
Dear Ben，
Thank you for your last e-mail．Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school．
As soon as we volunteers got to Guang'an Nursing Home，they gave us a warm welcome．We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people．We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them．Then we sang and danced．How happy we were!After that，we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them．The elderly people were very excited．When it was time for us volunteers to leave，they were grateful for our kindness．But I felt it our duty to care for the elderly people and respect them．
If you have the chance in China，I hope you can join us．
Yours，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是將"學(xué)雷鋒，送溫暖"活動(dòng)情況介紹給美國朋友Ben，與他分享你的美好經(jīng)歷．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1活動(dòng)時(shí)間：3月5日
2活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)：廣安敬老院（Guang'an Nursing Home）
3參加人員：學(xué)校志愿者
4活動(dòng)形式：送去鮮花和水果；幫助打掃衛(wèi)生；陪老人聊天（chat with sb）、唱歌、跳舞；送去美好祝愿…
5活動(dòng)感想：關(guān)愛老人，尊重老人
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
get to 到達(dá)
chat with sb 與某人聊天
give one's best wishes to sb 給某人最好的祝愿
it is time for sb to do sth某人做某事的時(shí)間到了
care for 關(guān)愛
高分句型：
1．①As soon as we ②volunteers got to Guang'an Nursing Home，they gave us a warm welcome．
①as soon as一…就…，引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句．
②volunteers作為主語同位語．
2．①But I felt ②③it our duty to ④care for the elderly people and respect them．
①but表轉(zhuǎn)折，引出不同的觀點(diǎn)．
②省略了that的賓語從句，作為feel的賓語．
③it是形式賓語，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正賓語
④care for sb 關(guān)愛某人

解答 Dear Ben，
Thank you for your last e-mail．Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school．（活動(dòng)時(shí)間）
As soon as we volunteers got to Guang'an Nursing Home，they gave us a warm welcome（高分句型）（地點(diǎn)．人員）．We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people．We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them．Then we sang and danced．How happy we were!After that，we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them．The elderly people were very excited．When it was time for us volunteers to leave，they were grateful for our kindness．（活動(dòng)形式）But I felt it our duty to care for the elderly people and respect them．（高分句型）（活動(dòng)感想）
If you have the chance in China，I hope you can join us．
Yours，
Zhang Hua

點(diǎn)評 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時(shí)的英語學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．