Question

反思可以使每個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)進(jìn)步，為未來(lái)做好計(jì)劃可以鑄就成功。初中的生活即將結(jié)束，新的高中學(xué)習(xí)將要到來(lái)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)記錄下一兩件最讓你感動(dòng)或遺憾的事，同時(shí)為你將來(lái)的生活做一點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)，下列句型可以幫助你完成作文。One…thing in my mind is…..,I am happy that……,It is a pity that I didn’t ……,I will……

要求：內(nèi)容真實(shí)，要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右,作文的開(kāi)頭已給出。

My life in Junior school will come to an end soon.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My life in Junior school will come to an end soon. I experienced so much. But there is one regretful thing in my mind. It makes me feel sorry forever.On the first year of my Junior school, my English was good, because I liked my English teacher and her class was lively. But later, my English teacher left us because of her job. Another English teacher came to teach us. His class was unenjoyable and I did not like him. So from then on, I began to do something that had nothing to do with my lessons. Sometimes I listened to MP3 in class. You can imagine how my English was then.From the thing, I recognized: Not every teacher can make his class enjoyable. If you do not work hard today, you will fail tomorrow.I will learn to suit others.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文主要是回顧初中的生活，用英語(yǔ)記錄下一兩件最讓你感動(dòng)或遺憾的事，同時(shí)為你將來(lái)的生活做一點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)，所以文章應(yīng)該分成兩段，第一段是回顧，第二段是展望。第一段是過(guò)去時(shí)，第二段是一般將來(lái)時(shí)。題目給了幾個(gè)句型，寫(xiě)作文時(shí)應(yīng)該盡量用上。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。有許多的好句子。如But there is one regretful thing in my mind. I will learn to suit others.， I began to do something that had nothing to do with my lessons.“我開(kāi)始做和課堂無(wú)關(guān)的事”。Not every teacher can make his class enjoyable.“不是每個(gè)老師的課堂都讓人快樂(lè)的”

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。