Question

20．理想是指路明燈，所以人人都會有夢想．你的夢想是什么？為什么會有這樣的夢想？怎樣才能實現(xiàn)呢？請以My dream為題寫寫你的夢想．
要求：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和學(xué)校．2．字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右．
My dream
Everyone has his own dream．My dream is to become a teacher．
Teachers can not teach us many things at school，but they do their best to teach us how to learn．Thanks to them，we learn knowledge．And at the same time，we learn how to live a happy life．They spend most time on their students．They are great in my eyes．
I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers．I know it is not easy to make my dream come true．But I decide to study harder from now on．I am sure my dream will come true．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以My dream為題寫寫你的夢想．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱輔以第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1你的夢想是什么？
2為什么會有這樣的夢想？
3怎樣才能實現(xiàn)呢？
常用到的重點短語：
thanks to sb 幸虧某人
at the same time同時
spend+時間 on sth花時間做某事
decide to do sth決定去做某事
from now on從現(xiàn)在開始
do one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
高分句型：
1．Teachers can not teach us many things at school，①but they②do their best to teach us③how to learn．
①but表轉(zhuǎn)折，連接前后兩個句子．
②do one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
③how to learn，是疑問詞+to do 結(jié)構(gòu)，作為teach的賓語．
2．I know①②it is not easy to make my dream come true．
①省略了that的賓語從句，作為know的賓語．
②it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的．it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語．

解答 Everyone has his own dream．My dream is to become a teacher．（點題）
Teachers can not teach us many things at school，but they do their best to teach us how to learn．（高分句型）Thanks to them，we learn knowledge．And at the same time，we learn how to live a happy life．They spend most time on their students．They are great in my eyes．
I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers．（為什么會有這樣的夢想）I know it is not easy to make my dream come true．（高分句型）But I decide to study harder from now on．（怎樣實現(xiàn)夢想）I am sure my dream will come true．（總結(jié)全文）

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．