Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分20分）

很多學(xué)校在臨近考試期間，往往將體育課改上一些“主課”課程。對此學(xué)生和老師都有自己的觀點，請根據(jù)表格提示，談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶�。詞數(shù)在80-100之間。

Teachers’ ideas	Your ideas
1. PE classes are less important	…
2. score means everything
3. knowledge is endless

注意： 1.內(nèi)容必須包括你自己的意見至少3點，適當(dāng)展開。

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名或地名。

3.文章開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

In many schools, the PE class is replaced by Chinese, math, or English before the exam.

_________________________________________________________what do you think of it?

Answer 1

【答案】

In many schools, the PE class is replaced by Chinese, math, scientist or English before the final exam. As for this, students and teachers all have different ideas. So we had a discussion about whether PE classes should be replaced by other classes. The opinions are as follows. Our teachers think PE classes are less important than Chinese, math and other classes. In their opinions, score means every thing and knowledge is endless.

However, I disagrees with them. Personally, I hold the opinion that we students have the right to have a rest. Besides, having PE classes can help us study better. More importantly, having PE classes can keep us in good health. As you know, health is everything. if you’re not healthy, you can’t get good grades anymore. In a word, I think we should have PE classes before the final exam. What do you think of it?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。所給材料內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，層次清楚，我們要做的就是用英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時要注意人稱、時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點: 這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，如：have a discussion about sth、in one’s opinions、have the right to do sth、keep in good health、As you know, health is everything、in a word以及過渡詞so、however等的使用，為文章增色不少。