Question

1．假如你叫李華，是"中華好少年"（China's Good Child）的候選人之一，請寫一份材料，介紹你在家里、在學校、在社會上（in society ）的表現(xiàn)．
寫作要求：1．詞數(shù)在80左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和人名，否則不得分；
3．所給的寫作要點都必須用上，緊扣主題，適當發(fā)揮．
My name is Li Hua，I am lucky to be chosen as one of China's Good ChildrenMy name is Li Hua．I am lucky to be chosen as one of China's Good Children．I am a good boy in my home，I get up early everyday and do some reading，then I do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．I often do some housework at home．
At school，I study hard and do the homework carefully．In class I often answer questions and after class，I often help the students with their lessons．In society，I often help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．
Li   Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit．做運動不僅能幫助我們保持健康．Doing exercise 是動名詞做主語，注意后面的謂語動詞用單數(shù)．
高分句型二
I study hard and do the homework carefully．我努力學習，認真做作業(yè)．注意carefully是副詞，修飾動詞，放在動詞的后面．

解答 I am a good boy in my home，I get up early every day and do some reading，then I do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit【高分句型一，注意動名詞的使用】，but also help to train a person's character．I often do some housework at home．【在家的表現(xiàn)】
At school，I study hard and do the homework carefully【高分句型二，注意副詞的使用】．In class I often answer questions and after class I often help the students with their lessons．【在學校的表現(xiàn)】In society，I often help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．【在社會上的表現(xiàn)】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．