Question

假如你叫李華，是“邯鄲好少年”的候選人之一，請(qǐng)你以“I Am Unique”為題，寫一份演講稿，介紹你在家里以及在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)。

寫作要求：

1. 詞數(shù)60~80，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 文稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名及相關(guān)信息；

3. 寫作的要點(diǎn)要緊扣主題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

I Am Unique

My name is Li Hua. I am lucky to be chosen as one of Handan’s Good Children. Now, I want to

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Answer 1

One possible version:

I Am Unique

My name is Li Hua. I am lucky to be chosen as one of Handan’s Good Children. Now, I want to say something about myself. I think I am a unique boy.

When I am at home, I listen to my parents, I respect them and sometimes I help them with some housework. Both of my parents say I am a good boy.

When I am at school, I listen to my teachers carefully in class. After class, I usually help my classmates do a lot of things, like cleaning the floor, doing the homework, and so on.

In a word, I think I am a good and unique boy. I believe I can do better in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。要求寫一份演講稿，介紹你在家里以及在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)。寫作的要點(diǎn)要緊扣主題，動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文開門見山，第一段就點(diǎn)明主題“I think I am a unique boy.”文中還使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：I respect them and sometimes I help them with some housework. Both of my parents say I am a good boy. cleaning the floor, doing the homework, and so on. In a word, I believe I can do better in the future. 等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。