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1．李克強總理將"全民閱讀"寫入了《政府工作報告》，倡導全民熱愛閱讀．請根據(jù)提示用英文向English Post投稿，簡述閱讀現(xiàn)狀及你對閱讀的看法和打算．

閱讀現(xiàn)狀	一些國人不常閱讀；有些人聲稱沒空，有些人認為沒用．
你的看法	閱讀很重要，因為…（至少兩點）
你的打算	…（至少兩點）

要求：1．詞數(shù)80左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范．
3．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和校名．
Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people．
However，some Chinese people seldom read in their spare time．Some say that they are too busy to do some reading，others think that it's useless to read．
But I think reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．
I'm planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday．And I'll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life．Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談談簡述閱讀現(xiàn)狀及你對閱讀的看法和打算．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1閱讀現(xiàn)狀：一些國人不常閱讀；有些人聲稱沒空，有些人認為沒用．
2你的看法
3你的打算
常用到的重點短語：
not only …but also…不僅…而不能…
make sb+adj讓某人怎樣
too…to do sth 太…去做某事
at least最少

【高分句型】
1．①Some say②that they are③too busy to do some reading，others think④that it's useless ⑤to read．
①some…others…一些…另一些…
②that引導的賓語從句，作為say的賓語．
③too…to do sth 太…而不能…
④that引導的賓語從句，作為think的賓語．
⑤動詞不定式做真正主語，it是形式主語．
2．It can ①not only open our minds but also ②make us more intelligent．
①not only …but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個并列成分．
②make sb+adj讓某人怎樣
3．①Besides，②reading is also ③one of the most important ways ④to learn a foreign language ⑤like English．
①besides 另外，引出下一觀點．
②動名詞reading做主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)is．
③one of+the+最高級+名詞復數(shù)，表示最怎么樣的…之一．
④動詞不定式做后置定語，修飾前面的ways．
⑤like表示例如，給出例子．

解答 Premier Li Keqiang has put the National Reading in his government work report to encourage a love of reading in all Chinese people．
However，some Chinese people seldom read in their spare time．Some say that they are too busy to do some reading，others think that it's useless to read．【高分句型】（閱讀現(xiàn)狀）
But I think reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．【高分句型】Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．【高分句型】（我的看法）       
I'm planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday．And I'll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life．Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now．（我的打算）

點評 初中英語的作文，著重考察學生連詞成句的能力，要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面．在對所出現(xiàn)的問題或是采取的措施描寫中注意使用連詞或是好的句式．對于中學作文的寫作，盡量將所學的知識運用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準確地道的作文．