Question

初中的學(xué)習(xí)生涯即將結(jié)束了。三年來，在你獲取知識(shí)的同時(shí)，你的外貌，興趣愛好，習(xí)慣…都有了一定的改變吧！請(qǐng)你以“How I’ve Changed”為題，寫一篇短文，告訴我們你的變化好嗎？

要求：1. 短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。

2. 60~80詞。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

How I’ve Changed

My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me. Now, I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提示性作文，主要寫初中三年除了在獲取知識(shí)的同時(shí)，在外貌，興趣愛好，習(xí)慣…都有哪些變化。時(shí)態(tài)主要涉及現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，在寫作時(shí)，要圍繞提示要點(diǎn)展開寫作，盡量用一些短語，使作文內(nèi)容更豐富。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】作者圍繞外貌，興趣愛好，習(xí)慣等幾方面進(jìn)行了寫作，采用了一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行對(duì)比，使前后變化體現(xiàn)得更明顯。文中用了不少短語，in the past three years, be interested in, spend…on, worry about, taller and stronger,keep healthier等，使短文更出彩，這是一篇很不錯(cuò)的作文。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。