Question

3．根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文．要求完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容．

It's dangerous to play on the street．
One day，Tom and John played football on the street．At that time a car was coming to them and hit Tom．He fell down and got injured．A policeman came here and sent him to the hospital．On the way，the policeman told them not to play on the street，it was dangerous．They felt sorry and decided not to play again．Then they went home happily．
We should pay attention to our safety，don't play on the street．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是用根據(jù)圖畫敘述不能在路上踢足球，有關(guān)安全的故事．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．描述圖畫；兩個(gè)男孩在街上踢足球，車子撞倒了其中一個(gè)男孩，警察送他去醫(yī)院，告訴他們不要在路上踢足球，危險(xiǎn)，他們決定不再在路上踢足球了．
2．感想
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
at that time 那時(shí)
fall down 摔倒
tell sb not to do sth 讓某人不要做某事
decide to do sth 決定做某事
pay attention to 關(guān)注
【高分句型】
1．It's dangerous to play on the street．
it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．

2．On the way，the policeman told them not to play on the street，it was dangerous．
tell sb not to do sth 讓某人不要做某事
3．We should pay attention to our safety，don't play on the street．
pay attention to 關(guān)注，to 是介詞，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．

解答 It's dangerous to play on the street．【高分句型】
   One day，Tom and John played football on the street．（第一幅圖，在街上踢球）At that time a car was coming to them and hit Tom．He fell down and got injured．（第二幅圖，撞倒受傷）A policeman came here and sent him to the hospital．On the way，the policeman told them not to play on the street，it was dangerous．【高分句型】（第三幅圖，送去醫(yī)院并告誡）They felt sorry and decided not to play again．Then they went home happily．（第四幅圖，決定不再在路上玩耍）
    We should pay attention to our safety，don't play on the street．【高分句型】（感想）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給圖畫作文，根據(jù)圖畫敘述一個(gè)故事．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用．寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用．寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系．