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11．成長(zhǎng)中每個(gè)人都要面對(duì)煩惱，并解決問(wèn)題．假設(shè)你叫李華，是美國(guó)中學(xué)生艾麗絲的朋友．你收到了她的電子郵件，請(qǐng)給她回復(fù)，回答她的問(wèn)題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />

Hi!Li Hua， I am very upset and I need your help．I didn't get on well with my best friend．I'm very worried because I have few friends．I don't want to lose her．What should I do？Do you have the same problem？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon． Yours， Alice

Hi!Alice， I'm glad to hear from you．Yes，I sometimes have the same problem． If you don't want to lose your best friend，you should talk with her．Tell her what you think and your feelings．You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in．You'd better learn how to get along well with your friends．I think communicating will make you become good friends again．A friend is a present which you give yourself． I hope what I said can help you． Yours， Li Hua

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分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是給好友艾麗絲的回信，針對(duì)她說(shuō)的不能和朋友好好相處的問(wèn)題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ�注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一、二人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．艾麗絲與朋友相處不好，你有同樣的情況嗎？
2．提出建議；
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
talk with sb 與某人交談
be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣
had better do sth 最好做某事
get along with sb 與某人相處
【高分句型】
1．If you don't want to lose your best friend，you should talk with her．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
2．You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in．
that作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，that作為從句的賓語(yǔ)，修飾先行詞things
3．I think①②communicating will make you become good friends again．
①think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)．

解答 Hi!Alice，
   I'm glad to hear from you．
   Yes，I sometimes have the same problem．（我也有同樣的情況）
   If you don't want to lose your best friend，you should talk with her．【高分句型】Tell her what you think and your feelings．You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in．【高分句型】You'd better learn how to get along well with your friends．I think communicating will make you become good friends again．【高分句型】A friend is a present which you give yourself．（提出建議）
I hope what I said can help you．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封回信．本題材料主要是一封來(lái)信，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信．在回信中對(duì)涉及的問(wèn)題都要有所回應(yīng)．根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．寫(xiě)作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫．