Question

4．假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tony春節(jié)期間要來一個中國家庭做客．請你根據(jù)他來信所提出的問題，給他寫一封郵件，告訴他北京的天氣狀況，中國春節(jié)的一些習俗，并就他在中國家庭的居住生活提出至少兩條建議．
提示詞語：cold，snow，the most important，try not to，don't，it's a good idea，must．

To：Tony
From：Li Hua
Subject：Visiting a Chinese family
Hi!Tony，
I'm very glad to know that you will visit Beijing．Now it is cold．Sometimes it snows，you can bring some warm clothes．
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China．There are some special traditions for you to follow．Try not to break anything．And don't clean your room on the first day．
When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return．You must accept it with both hands．Remember to open it later．
I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Beijing．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are some special traditions for you to follow．下面是你要遵循的一些特殊的傳統(tǒng)． 這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
 高分句型二
  When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return．當你拜訪一個中國家庭時，帶一件小禮物是個好主意，通常中國人會送你一份禮物．這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．

解答 To：Tony
From：Li Hua
Subject：Visiting a Chinese family
Hi!Tony，
I'm very glad to know that you will visit Beijing．Now it is cold．Sometimes it snows，you can bring some warm clothes．【要點一，介紹北京的天氣】
The Spring  Festival is the most important festival in China．There are some special traditions for you to follow．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】Try not to break anything．And don't clean your room on the first day．【要點二，介紹春節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)】
When you visit a Chinese family，it is a good idea to bring a small gift．Usually Chinese people will give you a present in return【高分句型二，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．You must accept it with both hands．Remember to open it later．【要點三，建議】
I hope this helps and enjoy your stay in Beijing．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．