Question

假如你是Alice, 你想寫一封推薦信，推薦你的同學(xué)Daniel獲得今年的新星獎。推薦

信字?jǐn)?shù)為100詞左右。開頭，結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Excellent qualities （優(yōu)秀的品質(zhì)）	Good examples （好的事例）
樂于助人	1．經(jīng)常幫助鄰居修電腦； 2．……（至少一點）
聰明	1．學(xué)東西快，努力學(xué)習(xí)各門學(xué)科； 2．野營時甚至?xí)�搭建帳篷�?/span>
勇敢	一個周日的早晨，他像往常一樣，坐在湖邊看書。突然聽到一個女孩大聲呼救，他跳進(jìn)湖里，把小女孩從水里救了上來，并送她回家。
……	……（至少兩句）

Dear Sir / Madam,

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. ______________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

He is also clever.____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

He is brave, too.____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Sir / Madam:

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Sta Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. He often helps his neighbours fix computers. He always gives his seat to someone on the bus.

He is also clever. He learns things quickly. He works hard on all the subjects. He is even able to put up tents when we go camping.

He is brave, too. One Sunday morning, he sat by the lake and read books as usual. Suddenly, he heard a girl calling for help. He jumped into the lake and saved the girl from the water. At last, he sent her home.

Daniel is polite and kind to others. He always says “hello” to his teachers. (He thinks carefully when he works. He plans everything well. He often takes part in all kinds of activities like collecting clothes and books for the children in need.)

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容推薦Daniel 獲得今年的新星獎，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括表格內(nèi)所有的信息。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)。文章銜接連貫，運用了also, when, at last等連詞進(jìn)行銜接。同時，本文中運用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:would like to, look forward to, take part in等。

考點：提綱作文。