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8．假定你是李華，看到班上有部分同學(xué)在完成作業(yè)時，不是自己獨立完成而是抄襲他人的作業(yè)．針對這種現(xiàn)象，請你以My opinions on copying others'homework為題談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />注意：1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 
2．短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．詞數(shù)：80左右．

Reasons	difficult and too much
	lazy and no interest
	…
Effect	against the school rules
Solutions	study hard
	ask…for help
Opinions	…

My opinion on copying others'homework
 
It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．There are several reasons for this phenomenon．The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday．Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises，in fact，it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions．
As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well．If we have difficulties，we can ask our teachers and classmates for help．
We should work hard to gain knowledge．Let's do our best to prevent such bad behavior from spreading．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"My opinion on copying others'homework"為題說說抄襲作業(yè)的原因和危害．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．主要原因；作業(yè)多，難，懶惰
2．影響：違反學(xué)校規(guī)則
3．解決辦法；努力學(xué)習(xí)，尋求幫忙
4．你的看法

常用到的重點短語：
work out 解答出
do sb a favor 幫忙
stay up 熬夜
do harm to 對…有害
not only…but …不僅…而且…

【高分句型】
1．It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．
it作為形式主語，that從句作為真正主語
2．The main reason is①that alarge amount of homework ②which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday．
①that從句作為表語，和is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)
②which是關(guān)系詞的定語從句，which作為主語，修飾先行詞homework．
3．①As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should②not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well．
①As far as I am concerned 就我而言
②not only…but …不僅…而且…連接前后兩個對等成分

解答 My opinion on copying others'homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others'homework．【高分句型】There are several reasons for this phenomenon．The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done everyday．（主要原因；作業(yè)多，難，）【高分句型】Although copying others'homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises，in fact，it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions．（影響；養(yǎng)成壞習(xí)慣，違反規(guī)則）
As far as I am concerned，as a student，we should not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well．【高分句型】If we have difficulties，we can ask our teachers and classmates for help．（解決辦法；努力學(xué)習(xí)，尋求幫忙）
We should work hard to gain knowledge．Let's do our best to prevent such bad behavior from spreading．（我的看法）

點評 這是一篇提綱作文，文章的題目已經(jīng)給出，而且列出了三條細(xì)節(jié)．寫作文時要仔細(xì)審題，每一條都要寫到．要注意前后句的連接，不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
文章主要寫我對抄襲作業(yè)的看法，要點全部都寫出，并且增加了一些內(nèi)容使文章更通順，更符合要求．文中使用很多短語，讓文章更加出彩，如It is known to us all that，a large amount of．，stay up late等．在平時的學(xué)習(xí)中，要注意點滴積累，這樣在寫作文時才能靈活運用．