Question

16．你即將畢業(yè)，學校要舉行2012屆畢業(yè)典禮．假設(shè)你將作為畢業(yè)生代表在會上用英語發(fā)言，請寫一篇發(fā)言稿．
內(nèi)容包括：1．回顧幾年來的校園生活．2．看今天自己的進步．
3．感謝老師和同學們的幫助；感謝父母的支持，向母校及老師們致以祝福．
作文要求：1．不能照抄原文； 不得出現(xiàn)學校和學生的真實姓名．
2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear teachers and students，
  It's a great honor for me to have such a chance to make a speech at this special moment and special place．First，I would like to say"thank you"to all the teachers and the students here．It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school．When we were here three years ago，we found everything new and strange．We were curious about everything．
Our teachers are very friendly and helpful．They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．When we have difficulties in learning，they are patient enough to help us．We could hardly succeed without our teachers'efforts．We've also made lots of friends here．We study together，play together and help each other．We feel very happy in the school．Also，I want to say"thank you"to out parents．Thanks for their support．Thanks for what they have do ne for us．
Last，I wish our school more and more beautiful，our teachers healthy and happy，and all of us a good future!
Thank you very much indeed．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是作為畢業(yè)生代表在會上用英語發(fā)言，回顧幾年來的校園生活并表示感激之情．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．回顧幾年來的校園生活．2．看今天自己的進步．
3．感謝老師和同學們的幫助；感謝父母的支持，向母校及老師們致以祝福．

常用到的重點短語：
be curious about 對…好奇
try to do sth 盡力做某事
make friends 交朋友
make…adj  讓…怎么樣
thanks for…因為…而謝謝
【高分句型】
1．①When we ②have difficulties in learning，they are ③patient enough to help us．
①when引導的時間狀語從句．
②have difficulties in doing sth 做某事有困難．
③形容詞+enough+to do sth 足夠怎么樣做某事
2．①Thanks for ②what they have done for us．
①thanks for…因為…而謝謝．
②what 引導的賓語從句，作為for的賓語．

解答 Dear teachers and students，
     It's a great honor for me to have such a chance to make a speech at this special moment and special place．First，I would like to say"thank you"to all the teachers and the students here．
     It has been three years since we came to the beautiful school．When we were here three years ago，we found everything new and strange．We were curious about everything．（回顧幾年來的校園生活）
     Our teachers are very friendly and helpful．They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．When we have difficulties in learning，they are patient enough to help us．【高分句型】We could hardly succeed without our teachers'efforts．（看今天自己的進步）We've also made lots of friends here．We study together，play together and help each other．We feel very happy in the school．Also，I want to say"thank you"to our parents．Thanks for their support．Thanks for what they have done for us．【高分句型】（感謝老師和同學們的幫助；感謝父母的支持）
   Last，I wish our school more and more beautiful，our teachers healthy and happy，and all of us a good future!（向母校及老師們致以祝福）
   Thank you very much indeed．

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上．語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．