Question

8．提示：初中生活即將結(jié)束，你的老師陪伴你度過了三年的校園生活．回顧其中的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記．請你用英語給你的某一位老師寫一封信，和他（她）說說心里話．
要點(diǎn)提示：
①你的老師工作努力認(rèn)真、教學(xué)耐心、待人友好等；
②記敘一件老師給予你學(xué)習(xí)和生活上幫助的事；
③表達(dá)你對老師的情感．
要求：
①語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個，已給出的詞不計入總詞數(shù)；
②文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計；
③將短文寫在答題卡上．寫在本試題卷上無效．
Dear my teacher，
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have so many words from my heart to say．
Since you became my English teacher three years ago，you've always been working hard．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．You're strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly．All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years．I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．
Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!
Yours，
Lucy．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是給你的某一位教師寫封信，和他（她）說說感激的心里話．注意信件的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
①你的老師工作努力認(rèn)真、教學(xué)耐心、待人友好等；
②記敘一件老師給予你學(xué)習(xí)和生活上幫助的事；
③表達(dá)你對老師的情感．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
work hard努力學(xué)習(xí)
be strict with sb in sth對某人在某事上嚴(yán)格
take care of照顧
get on with sb 與某人相處
encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事
because of …因?yàn)椤?br />make progress取得進(jìn)步
【高分句型】
1．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．
and連接的兩個感嘆句how+形容詞或副詞+主語+謂語！作為forget的賓語從句．
2．①Because of your help，many students，including me，are ②more and more ③interested in English and④make much progress，too．
①because of因?yàn)椤�，后加名詞代詞或動名詞．
②比較級+and+比較級 越來越…
③be interested in 對…感興趣
④make progress取得進(jìn)步

解答 Dear my teacher，
     Leaving you-lovely junior schoollife，I have so many words from my heart to say．
     Since you became my English teacher three years ago，you've always been working hard．（工作努力，認(rèn)真）I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are【高分句型】（教學(xué)耐心，待人友好）．You're strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly．All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years．I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（給予學(xué)習(xí)上和生活上的幫助）
     Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．【高分句型】You have given me so much．
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（對老師的情感）
Yours，
Lucy

點(diǎn)評 本題是一篇提綱作文，寫作時也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．本題要注意信件的格式．