Question

11．初中階段的學習生活即將結束．假設你是張華，身在中考考場，回想自己在父母和師長的關愛和幫助下的成長過程，心中充滿感戴之情．請根據(jù)表中所列信息，用英語給父母或老師寫一封70詞左右的短信，表示謝意．

感謝對象	Father	Mother	Miss Gao
參考詞匯	take care of，love，help，encourage，cheer up…
	thankful，work hard，try to do better…

注意：1．感謝對象可在父母或老師中任選其一，但請避用真實姓名和校名．
2．除表格所列關鍵詞語外，還可適當發(fā)揮、舉例并抒發(fā)感受．
3．信的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出．
DearMum/Dad/Mum and Dad，
  Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you…You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．
Best wishes!
                                                    Yours
                                                         Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是父母或老師寫一封信，表示謝意．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．感謝的對象；
2．感謝原因；
3．舉例說明
4．感受和打算．
常用到的重點短語：
take care of照顧
in trouble 處于困境
argue with sb 與某人爭吵
cheer up 使振奮起來
used to do sth 過去常常做某事
get along with sb 與某人相處
try to do sth 盡力做某事
【高分句型】
1．①When I was in trouble，you②used to encourage me and cheer me up．
①when引導的時間狀語從句．in trouble 處于困境
②used to do sth 過去常常做某事，cheer up 使振奮起來．
2．①Once I ②argued with my classmates and I didn't know③how to deal with it．
①once 副詞．曾經(jīng)．
②argue with sb 與某人爭吵
③疑問詞+to do sth 作為know的賓語． deal with 處理
3．I'm ①so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and ②try to do better in the future．
①so…that如此…以至于，that引導的結果狀語從句．
②try to do sth 盡力做某事

解答 Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad，（感謝的對象）
   Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you．You've taken good care of me in the past three years．When I was in trouble，you used to encourage me and cheer me up．【高分句型】（感謝原因）Once I argued with my classmates and I didn't know how to deal with it．【高分句型】You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others．With your help，I've become a popular boy and made a lot of friends．（舉例說明）I'm so thankful to you for your love and care that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future．【高分句型】（感受和打算）
Best wishes
Yours
Zhang Hua

點評 在初中三年的學習生活中，父母、老師給了我們很多幫助．假設你是李明，在即將畢業(yè)之際，用英語寫一段文字以表達感激之情．感謝的對象在父母、老師中任選其一，根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容可知這里敘述的過去的事情，所以句子應該用過去時．后面的感受及打算部分句子應該用將來時．要注意句子上文之間的銜接．本文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩．短文中還用了一些連詞，使句子結構更加復雜化，增加了文章的亮點