Question

15．下面是Sarah給Sue的e-mail，請你仔細(xì)閱讀原文，然后根據(jù)你的情況，以Sue為名給Sarah發(fā)一封e-mail．字?jǐn)?shù)在80個詞左右．
請注意：1．不得寫出自己或?qū)W校的真實名稱；2．不得照抄原文．
Dear Sue，
How are you？Summer holiday began last week．My brother and I are having our holiday．During the holiday we are planning to learn swimming，climb the mountains and do many other things．Yesterday we went to the museum with my parents．On the way home，we went shopping．My mother bought me a beautiful skirt and a new recorder for my English study．We are sure we'll have a very good time．
How about you，my dear friend？Have you made any plans for your summer holiday？Please write me soon．
Sarah

Dear Sarah，
Thanks for your e-mail．I'm glad you are enjoying your holiday．Now let me tell you something about my holiday．            ．
Sue．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信．本題材料主要通過一份來信給出，故動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀來信，爭取在回信中對來信內(nèi)容都有所回應(yīng)．寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤．注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫．
高分句型：
①Now let me tell you something about my holiday．現(xiàn)在讓我告訴你一些關(guān)于我假期的事．句子考查let sb do sth讓某人做某事，后面跟動詞原形．
②Also I'll help my parents with their farm work．我也會幫助我的父母做農(nóng)活．句子考查短語help sb with sth表示幫著某人做某事．

解答 Dear Sarah，
Thanks for your e-mail．I'm glad you are enjoying your holiday．Now let me tell you something about my holiday（高分句型）．（引出話題）I didn't do well in my maths exam，so the most important thing for me in the holiday is that I must spend most of the time on it．I'll do some more exercises．When I have time，I'll visit some friends．Also I'll help my parents with their farm work（高分句型）．After the farm work we will make a trip to Yellow Mountains．I believe we'll enjoy it．（假期中將要做的事情）
I hope you can come to see me sometime in the holiday．（希望）
Sue

點評 注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多．寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯．