Question

13．上星期，學(xué)校就學(xué)生的作業(yè)量問題要求各班召開家長(zhǎng)會(huì)進(jìn)行討論．以下是你班家長(zhǎng)的觀點(diǎn)：多數(shù)家長(zhǎng)認(rèn)為作業(yè)多有好處，而部分家長(zhǎng)則認(rèn)為作業(yè)過多對(duì)孩子的成長(zhǎng)不利．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格的提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)．

Most parents	A few parents
review what students have learned	take a lot of time
develop students'minds	can't have a good rest
stop students playing computer games	can't do the things students like
…	…

要求：
1．用上所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．語(yǔ)言正確，行文流暢，書寫規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)：80左右；
4．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名．
Last week our class had a parents'meeting．At the meeting，all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是說說家長(zhǎng)們對(duì)家庭作業(yè)的看法以及自己的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．大部分家長(zhǎng)；復(fù)習(xí)學(xué)生學(xué)過的內(nèi)容，鍛煉思維，防止玩電腦游戲．
2．一些家長(zhǎng)；浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，不能好好休息，不能做學(xué)生喜歡的事情
3．我的觀點(diǎn)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
talk sbout 談?wù)?br />stop sb doing sth 阻止某人做某事
what's more 再者
in one's opinion  依某人看來
【高分句型】
1．They thought ①by doing a lot of homework，the students could review①what they had learned．
①think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．by+doing表示通過某種方式．
②what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為review的賓語(yǔ)．
2．①What's more，they could not do the things②they liked．
①what's more 再者
②they like是定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞things，關(guān)系詞which作為賓語(yǔ)，故省略．
3．①In my opinion，②doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful．
①in one's opinion  依某人看來
②動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)is．

解答 Last week our class had a parents'meeting．At the meeting，all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not
Most parents thought that doing much homework was useful．They thought by doing a lot of homework，the students could review what they had learned．【高分句型】It would also help to develop the students'minds and stop them playing computer games．（大部分家長(zhǎng)；復(fù)習(xí)，鍛煉思維，防止玩電腦游戲．）
But a few parents thought that too much homework was useless．Because doing much homework took a lot of time and the students could not have a good rest．What's more，they could not do the things they liked．【高分句型】（一些家長(zhǎng)；浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，不能好好休息，不能做喜歡的事情）
In my opinion，doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful．【高分句型】（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．