Question

17．英語課上，老師組織大家就以下兩幅圖進(jìn)行"To change or not"的話題討論．請用英語
闡述你對此話題的看法．

注意：
（1）短文可結(jié)合圖片信息或自身經(jīng)歷，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名：
（3）詞數(shù)：80-100，短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)．
短文首句；Last week，we had a discussion about the topic"To change or not"．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 I think different people have different choices to deal with problems． 我認(rèn)為不同的人有處理問題的不同的選擇．這是一個賓語從句，I hope是主句，后面的是賓語從句． 
高分句型二
When I was in Grade 7，I had difficulty with my spoken English．當(dāng)我在7年級時，我學(xué)英語口語有困難．
這是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，當(dāng)…時候．

解答 Last week，we had a discussion about the topic"To change or not"【開頭點明主題】．I think different people have different choices to deal with problems【高分句型一，注意賓語從句的使用】．For example，when meeting with the weight problem，some people decide to take exercises to lose weight while others think they can't do anything about it．
When I was in Grade 7，I had difficulty with my spoken English．【高分句型二，注意時間狀語從句的使用】Instead of giving up，I chose to change．I tried my best to listen to tapes and practice speaking every day．Now my pronunciation has been improved a lot．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹討論內(nèi)容】
In a word，we should take action to change．Surely it will make a great difference．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．