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6．近幾年來，隨著信息時代的發(fā)展，手機已經(jīng)是生活中相當重要的一部分，請你根據(jù)提示內容用英語寫一篇80詞以上的短文，談談中學生是否應該使用手機．
提示內容：

	1．現(xiàn)在是信息社會，手機是最快的信息交流的工具之一．
贊成	2．應充分利用好手機．如偶遇突發(fā)事故，可立即撥打手機求助．
	3．可在每天學習之余利用手機游戲放松一下自己．
	4．只要正確使用好手機，緊跟時間并無過錯，追求時尚可以理解，但學習是首要任務．
不贊成	1．學校已提供了公共電話，因此手機并不能帶來更多的方便，而且花費較多．
	2．若課堂接聽手機會影響上課．
	3．學生玩手機游戲或接發(fā)短信，將無法集中精力學習．

提示詞匯：信息社會information society    撥打 dial    時尚 fashion
寫作要求：所給提示內容必須全部用上，并適當發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)在80個左右．
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students．As we know，the 21st century is a modern age and full of information．A mobile phone is one of thequickest tools for us to exchange information in the information society．The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention，so we ought to make the best use of it．Suppose there's a sudden accident，it is more convenient for us to dial forhelp immediately．There're also some games in the mobile phone．We can relax ourselves by playing themwhen we're tired of our studies．
However，some people think that there are public telephones in the school，it's no need to bring mobile phones to shool．If they carry mobile phones，they will spend more．What's more，using phones in class can affect their study．Theycan't pay attention to learning．
In myopinion，we can bring mobile phones to school．It's not wrong to follow the fashion，but the most importantthing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students．
句中"more and more popular"為比較級的特殊用法"比較級+and+比較級  越來越…"．這句話意為：現(xiàn)在手機在中學生中越來越流行．
高分句型二：
We can relax ourselves by playing them when we're tired of our studies．
句中"when we're tired of our studies"為時間狀語從句，句中短語有"be tired of…厭倦…"．這句話意為：當我們厭倦學習時，我們可以玩手機來放松一下．

解答 Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students．【高分句型一】As we know，the 21st century is a modern age and full of information．A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information in the information society．The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention，so we ought to make the best use of it．Suppose there's a sudden accident，it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately．There're also some games in the mobile phone．We can relax ourselves by playing them when we're tired of our studies．【高分句型二】（贊成的觀點）
However，some people think that there are public telephones in the school，it's no need to bring mobile phones to shool．If they carry mobile phones，they  will spend more．What's more，using phones in class can affect their study．They can't pay attention to learning．（不贊成的觀點）
In my opinion，we can bring mobile phones to school．It's not wrong to follow the fashion，but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way．（我的觀點）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．