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因為在資源日益短缺、生態(tài)環(huán)境受到挑戰(zhàn)的今天，發(fā)展低碳經濟、倡導低碳生活、建設低碳城市正在成為國際上普遍認同的經濟社會發(fā)展模式。
假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Chris給你發(fā)郵件來，向你詢問你校正在開展的低碳生活活動情況。請寫回信。主題為行動改變世界。盡量少坐公車，步行，騎單車；使用電子賀卡；使用雙面紙；節(jié)約水，電……
注意：1.開頭和結尾部分已寫好。
2.所寫內容必須包括提示中的信息�？蛇m當增加談論話題時經常用到的話語，所寫內容連貫。
3.詞數：70個左右。
Dear Chris,mr
As you said in the e-mail that my school are launching the low carbon living activity now. And I
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Chris,
As you said in the e-mail that my school are launching the low carbon living activity now. And I am taking an active part in it. The theme of the activity is changing the world by actions. It suggests us go to school on foot or by bike instead of by bus and car. Besides, we should use e-greeting cards rather than the attritional cards. As to save the paper , it asks us to use both sides of every piece of paper. Of course, we should save water and electricity at the same time.
Therefore, how do you think of the activity? I am looking forward to hearing from you again.
Yours，
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。覆蓋所有內容要點；應用了較豐富的語法結構和詞匯；用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字數符合要求。完全達到了預期的寫作目的。